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Sun Apr 06, 2014 8:28 pm
retrodisco666 says...



Hey I'm accepting WRFF :)

My only condition is that's it's poetry. I can only review poetry, however, I'm quite content to read fiction
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Sun Apr 06, 2014 10:55 pm
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KaiTheGreater says...



Pretty please? :D
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Tue Apr 08, 2014 7:24 pm
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Pompadour says...



Could you please leave a review on this?
Ex.Tempo.Rise.
Thank youu! :D
How to format poetry on YWS

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Wed Apr 09, 2014 12:40 am
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Crimsona says...



Hi there, I'd be ever so grateful if you could review my poem: I Tried to Write a Poem

Thank you. :)
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Thu May 01, 2014 4:25 am
Glauke says...



Hi :)
I'd be so grateful if you could take a look at either or both of my newest poems:

Untitled No. 1
absolution

Thanks so much! :)
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be still, sad heart, and cease repining
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Wed May 07, 2014 6:17 am
TakeThatYouFiend says...



T*** Patrol
Oink?
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Wed May 07, 2014 11:02 am
veeren says...



heyo there mr famous poetry guy, mond showing a newbie how it's done? xp

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