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Monster Reviews



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131 Reviews



Gender: Other
Points: 33
Reviews: 131
Fri Mar 07, 2014 8:10 pm
Monsters says...



Only accepting poetry

Monster Reviews is not about points. It is about trying to get you to express emotions and views in an effective, critical way. I will often bring up points that are usually never brought up here on yws including estabilishing credability, clarity, sentence structure, logic, critical analysis of literary devices and originality.

This is my "is my reviews right for you" checklist. Do not request a review if you do not find every one of these things to be true.

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I can take criticism without getting angry even if I disagree
I find it annoying when people review me only to say everything is good
I admire honesty over being nice
I want a review to help me learn and progress as a writer
I find all types of incite to be valuable


When you request a review you agree to the following;

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I will not be rude or try to prove the reviewer wrong in a comment
I will ask questions if I do not understand something
I will read the review and use it to improve myself and/or improve the work
  





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51 Reviews



Gender: Male
Points: 10
Reviews: 51
Mon Mar 10, 2014 8:53 am
LordGreenleaf says...



Hi, could I get a review on this?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=109338
Behind every great man is a woman rolling her eyes. - Jim Carey
  





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17 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 240
Reviews: 17
Tue Mar 11, 2014 3:25 pm
EllaBliss says...



profile/EllaBliss/portfolio

Raid the portfolio! *Goes to greenroom to pay it off*
Oh, I'm such a fool! I can't be free!
No escape from the storm inside of me!
I can’t control the curse!
Please, you’ll only make it worse!
There’s so much fear! You’re not safe here!
  








It's unsettling to know how little separates each of us from another life altogether.
— Wes Moore, The Other Wes Moore