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Thu Mar 06, 2014 12:50 pm
Snowery says...



Welcome to Silver's Critique Circus!!!

I am Silver the ring master.

Please leave all prams and umbrellas outside the tent in the sheltered area. Yes, yes, that's the way, thank you. :)

So! Where was I? Oh yes! This is the place to deposit all the stories that you want reviewed. I'll review any genre but I WILL NOT review poetry or lyrics (I'm not qualified :) ). Otherwise short stories, essays, scripts and novels are all welcome. Also just to let you know, I'm an honest reviewer and won't sugarcoat things however I'm not mean and always try to mention as many positives as I can. :) So take a seat and brace yourself for the show! Enjoy!

(P.s. I'l try to get to them on time but I can't promise because I can get really busy sometimes)
Last edited by Snowery on Sat Sep 06, 2014 2:32 am, edited 3 times in total.
The World Is Mine.
  





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Fri Mar 07, 2014 4:32 am
musingsmutterings says...



Hi Silverlock, I'd love a review for my short story "The Last Apple Tree" if you have the time! :)
  





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Fri Mar 07, 2014 4:41 am
Snowery says...



@musingsmutterings Great I'll get to it as soon as I can!! Could you post the link??
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Sun Mar 09, 2014 7:55 am
LordGreenleaf says...



Hi, I'd love a review for this poem

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=109338

Thanks!
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Sun Mar 09, 2014 10:25 am
Snowery says...



@LordGreenleaf I'm really sorry but I did mention that I don't review poems. :( I've only ever done two and feel really inadequate when it comes to reviewing them. I don't think that I'll be able to say anything constructive. I'm really sorry. Feel free to request a review for anything else though! :)
Last edited by Snowery on Sun Mar 09, 2014 10:44 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Sun Mar 09, 2014 8:03 pm
NerdBird says...



Hi there! Id love it if you could review my revised chapter 1 and 2 of my shifties story!
The Shifties: Chapter 1 - Prey
and
The Shifties: Chapter 2 - Nightmare

Much appreciated :D
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Sun Mar 09, 2014 9:57 pm
Snowery says...



@NerdBird I'll be on it as soon as possible!! :D
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Tue Mar 11, 2014 1:55 am
Snowery says...



Alrighty! @musingsmutterings and @NerdBird I've done your reviews! I hope you like them : C'mon people, give me more!
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Fri Mar 14, 2014 10:35 am
NerdBird says...



Id love it if you could review my new short story Zom-Brawl :D

please and thank you^-^
  





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Tue Mar 18, 2014 1:43 am
Snowery says...



@NerdBird I'll get to it as soon as I can but it might take a while 'coz of all the stuff I have due for uni.
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Tue Mar 18, 2014 10:04 am
NerdBird says...



That is fine @Silverlock :D
  





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Tue Mar 18, 2014 12:35 pm
WritingWolf says...



Could you please review my short story The Story Of Not?

Oh, and I have fixed most of the spelling/grammar mistakes, but I haven't put the edited version on YWS yet. So for now please just ignore the spelling/grammar mistakes that you see there.
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Wed Mar 19, 2014 12:11 am
Snowery says...



@WritingWolf I will as soon as I can :)
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Wed Apr 09, 2014 2:23 am
DrFeelGood says...



Could you please review my story Exam Result Thanks :D
  





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Fri Apr 11, 2014 9:01 am
Snowery says...



All done!! C'mon people! Give me MORE!!!
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