@Aurora99 I shall hopefully get to this by early July! I'm so sorry for the delay, but I have exams To make up for it I'll try and review your previous chapters as well
No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it. — LCDR Geordi La Forge
Gender:
Points: 3486
Reviews: 212