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Tue Apr 26, 2022 8:36 am
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Liminality says...



Sure @RandomTalks! I'll get to that latest by Saturday (might even be able to review it today) :D
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Tue Apr 26, 2022 4:39 pm
Moonglade says...



Hi Lim

I'd really thankful if you would review my poem: Born A Girl
It's been in the green room for a few days now, it's a rant I guess and a little violent so just tell me if you'd rather not.

Lehmanf
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Wed Apr 27, 2022 6:48 am
Liminality says...



Hi @lehmanf! Sorry, but as my intro post in the WRFF thread says, this isn't really in my area of expertise ^^'. Maybe you could ask someone else or post it in the General Request Repository? I hope you manage to find a reviewer for it soon!
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Wed Apr 27, 2022 9:25 am
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Moonglade says...



No need to worry, Lim.

I'll try and find someone else to review, quickly I hope. One question if that's alright. I'm a tiny bit confused where you specify this type of work isn't your expertise. Are you classifying it as no. 2: "Works that dig really deep into mental health topics"
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Wed Apr 27, 2022 9:37 am
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Liminality says...



Spoiler! :
@lehmanf Yup, since it sort of gets into descriptions of self-harm and seems to be about a very personal topic. I just don't feel comfortable reviewing stuff like that because my reviewing style tends to be very academic/ style-focused and I think it would be insensitive of me to review something of that topic in the way I usually do. I hope you understand.
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Wed Apr 27, 2022 9:39 am
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Moonglade says...



Spoiler! :
That actually makes perfect sense. Thank you for letting me know why.
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Mon Jan 09, 2023 9:41 am
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Mika Honeydew says...



Hi hi, please review my short story.


Title: The AI war
Genre: Science fiction, Tech



this is suitable for you to review! Please do. Thanks!




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Mon Jan 09, 2023 3:15 pm
Liminality says...



@Mika Honeydew Thanks for the request - I've reviewed that piece!
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Wed Jan 11, 2023 1:05 pm
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loveissourgrapes says...



Hi Lim! Can you please review my story you? I hope you enjoy it as well. Thank you!
jisrahinav
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Wed Jan 11, 2023 2:01 pm
Liminality says...



Gotcha, @jisrahinav! I've reviewed that story.
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Wed Jan 18, 2023 3:38 pm
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Overwatchful says...



Hey Liminality! I was hoping you could drop a review on my story Burning? Not really looking for grammar/punctuation help-unless its a consistent issue-so if you could say what you think about my storytelling and imagery that would be great! Thank you in advance!
Quite... Overwatchful
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Thu Jan 19, 2023 12:18 pm
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Liminality says...



Hey @Overwatchful! I'll try to get to your request by the end of the week :D
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Sat Jan 21, 2023 10:23 am
Liminality says...



@Overwatchful I've reviewed the piece!
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Mon Jan 23, 2023 11:53 am
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yamatri says...



hey , ,I am not sure if you are still open to reviewing request but hope you can review my poem

WHAT is youth ?

I don't know how to add the link.




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Mon Jan 23, 2023 12:04 pm
Liminality says...



Hey @yamatri! I can review that poem. You can usually add links to works by just copying and pasting the url of the work.
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