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Mon Sep 19, 2022 6:41 pm
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Fishr says...



Memento Mori
This please, loose leaf.
Thank you!
The sadness drains through me rather than skating over my skin. It travels through every cell to reach the ground. I filter it yet strangely enough, I keep what was pure and it is the dirt that leaves.
  





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Fri Sep 23, 2022 3:01 am
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Sorry for the late response, @Fishr, but I'll try to get to it this weekend! (poke me on Monday if I haven't done it yet :)))
  





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Fri Sep 23, 2022 3:39 am
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Thank you!
The sadness drains through me rather than skating over my skin. It travels through every cell to reach the ground. I filter it yet strangely enough, I keep what was pure and it is the dirt that leaves.
  





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Mon Sep 26, 2022 5:09 pm
Glauke says...



Hi, I would love it if you could help me out with a review on my short story Hypoxia. It's been a while since I've written in this medium so I'm trying to shake the rust off and feedback really helps. Thanks in advance :)
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be still, sad heart, and cease repining
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Fri Oct 28, 2022 5:54 pm
Fishr says...



looseleaf wrote:Sorry for the late response, @Fishr, but I'll try to get to it this weekend! (poke me on Monday if I haven't done it yet :)))


Heh. So. I did some editing, and now I’m not sure if it is qualified as a short story anymore. But if you want to give it a go, I’m most interested in character development.
Memento Mori
The sadness drains through me rather than skating over my skin. It travels through every cell to reach the ground. I filter it yet strangely enough, I keep what was pure and it is the dirt that leaves.
  





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Thu Nov 17, 2022 6:40 pm
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HJYoung says...



Entropy

Plz review!
I stand above this all. For with every virgin kingdom, there is always an august king.
  








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