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Wed Sep 16, 2020 1:31 pm
Riverlight says...



Here ya go!

America Gone - Prologue
The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.
  





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Tue Nov 10, 2020 7:35 pm
Soccer23 says...



Hi Icy!
If you could review this, that would be awesome!
"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken"
"Just because you're trash doesn't mean you can't do big things; It's trash can, not trash can't"
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Tue Nov 10, 2020 7:49 pm
IcyFlame says...



Sure thing! I have a couple on my to do list right now but I'll get round to it as soon as I can <3
  





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Fri Mar 26, 2021 5:02 am
ForeverYoung299 says...



Hello. Can you pls review Diary of a leader of surreptitious past(D.O.A.L.O.S.P) Part 1?

Um...I see the last review request was on 11th november 2020. Are you still reviewing?
  





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Sat Sep 11, 2021 8:04 am
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MailicedeNamedy says...



Hello IcyFlame!

I saw your post and was wondering if you would be interested in reviewing my novel Longing of a Maiden Rose? I'm already getting a lot of feedback because of RevMo and I see that on some points the reviewers agree and on other points they don't, where I could maybe get another opinion to get final feedback for some scenes.

Chapter I.1. (You´ve already reviewed this piece.)
Chapter I.2.

The genres are Mystery and Young Adult and probably something that is called development novel (I think).

I don´t know, do you need some more information? :D

Mailice
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I´m just a random girl with gentle manners

Every bad voice in your head was once outside
  





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Fri Sep 17, 2021 9:29 am
RandomTalks says...



Hey IcyFlame!

I saw that you are accepting, and I was wondering if you would like to take a look at my novella, The Old Man And The Boy. It is a really simple story, and has 8 short parts and an epilogue. The first part has a lot of reviews but I really need to understand how the readers see it as a whole.

I would be really grateful!

Here's the link:

The Old Man And The Boy 1

If you are interested, I will send you the rest of the links or you can just find them there.

Let me know!
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Sun Oct 10, 2021 11:46 am
MissGangamash says...



Hi IcyFlame!

Would you like to check out my novel Fool Without A Master (Chapter 1 Part 1)? I would really appreciate having a continuous reader/reviewer which you've said you're up for. So if you like it, I have three and a half chapters up at the moment for you to check out :)
  





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Mon Oct 25, 2021 3:53 am
PoochieMoo says...



Hello! I am brand new here, and joined looking for some feedback on my novel I'm currently working on. At the moment it is 3 chapters, and 12,591 words.

As for the genre, it's almost historical fiction, but set in a fictional world, with light steampunk elements. It's in a military setting as well.

I'd be super appreciative if you could give it a look and let me know what you think: first impressions, critique, general thoughts on the story, etc.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1c-g ... sp=sharing
  








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