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Tue Mar 31, 2020 1:05 pm
Liebensteiner says...



ChrisDixon wrote:I need someone to review my poem.

Broken
Broken

Thank you

Done @ChrisDixon :)
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Tue Mar 31, 2020 1:06 pm
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theescaper020 wrote:Hey
Can you please review my work @Gwaenchana ?
But i really don't know how to create a link for you .

Done @theescaper020 c:
LadyBug is the best frister ever <3
(everyone please know that LadyBug's the coolest goose you will ever meet)
(this goose blushes too much)
(lol imagine a blushing goose xD <3)
  





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Tue Mar 31, 2020 3:24 pm
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dahlia58 says...



If you're still accepting requests...may I submit this:
Sleepless - Side scene 3 (ft. Nagisa Kinoshita + Jun Minami + Yoko Hatakeyama)

I've been trying to get novel chapters out of the green room before review day's over
  





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Tue Mar 31, 2020 4:03 pm
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dahlia58 wrote:If you're still accepting requests...may I submit this:
Sleepless - Side scene 3 (ft. Nagisa Kinoshita + Jun Minami + Yoko Hatakeyama)

I've been trying to get novel chapters out of the green room before review day's over

This is probably the fastest I've finished a review! O.o Done @dahlia58!
LadyBug is the best frister ever <3
(everyone please know that LadyBug's the coolest goose you will ever meet)
(this goose blushes too much)
(lol imagine a blushing goose xD <3)
  





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Sun Apr 26, 2020 8:06 pm
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4revgreen wrote:Hi, if you're still accepting It'd be amazing if you could review a few chapters of my ongoing story! https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/4revgreen/The-Sticks-Chapter-One-146681 That's chapter one, you'll be able to find the others after that.
I don't know if it will be your kind of story, as it's quite depressing and not really funny at all. It's about a girl, Castle, who's girlfriend died a few months ago. It also has chapters from the past when she's younger.
Thanks for the time, even if you don't get round to it :-)

@4revgreen - I'm all caught up now! I can't wait to read more! :smt003
LadyBug is the best frister ever <3
(everyone please know that LadyBug's the coolest goose you will ever meet)
(this goose blushes too much)
(lol imagine a blushing goose xD <3)
  





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Mon Apr 27, 2020 3:30 am
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Hanuli says...



Hi! If you're still accepting reviews, I would love to get a review on the first chapter of my new novel.

ennui - 01

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Mon Apr 27, 2020 8:02 am
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JenTep says...



You must be a saint to offer this service! I'd appreciate your thoughts on my story Black Box (Drama/Romance (Not too much I hope!)) I try to aim for a bittersweet undertone in my stories and I'm always interested in other's thoughts!

Link: Black Box

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Tue Sep 01, 2020 12:14 pm
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Hanuli wrote:Hi! If you're still accepting reviews, I would love to get a review on the first chapter of my new novel.

ennui - 01

Thank you!


Apologies for the delay >.< I'm done!
LadyBug is the best frister ever <3
(everyone please know that LadyBug's the coolest goose you will ever meet)
(this goose blushes too much)
(lol imagine a blushing goose xD <3)
  





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Sun Nov 15, 2020 7:56 pm
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Vil says...



Name of your piece: On the Song of EƤrendil the Mariner
Genre of your piece: Essay on a Fantasy Work
What you want me to cover: Just a general overview :P
Other: It's a bit on the short side compared to the essays I normally write because I was short on time :P
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Sun Nov 15, 2020 8:33 pm
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Ah @Vil thanks for the request. xD I'm very dusty nowadays with reviewing, but I'll try to get to that as soon as I can! :)
LadyBug is the best frister ever <3
(everyone please know that LadyBug's the coolest goose you will ever meet)
(this goose blushes too much)
(lol imagine a blushing goose xD <3)
  





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Thu Nov 19, 2020 1:07 pm
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lulon says...



can you please review my poem?
just eat
thank youuu <333
an idiot plot is "a plot which is kept in motion solely by virtue of the fact that everybody involved is an idiot," and where the story would otherwise be over if this were not the case.

my life is an idiot plot.

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Thu Nov 19, 2020 5:35 pm
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@lulon Will do! Give me about a couple of days (not more than a week) and I'll try to get your poem done as soon as I'm done with Vil's essay. :)
LadyBug is the best frister ever <3
(everyone please know that LadyBug's the coolest goose you will ever meet)
(this goose blushes too much)
(lol imagine a blushing goose xD <3)
  








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