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Tue Oct 17, 2017 9:51 am
Danni88 says...



Moonlight: Chapter One
Moonlight:Chapter Two

Could you review these for me please? Thanks ever so much
Mmm, teatime. I fancy reviews and chips.

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Sat Oct 21, 2017 11:35 am
ValerieSong says...



Hello and good day!

I'm a new member here in YWS.

I am requesting a review for my story, Chewing Gum An Angel's Mission.

Here is the link to my story:
Chewing Gum An Angel's Mission

Thanks for your time.

-Valerie
  





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Wed Oct 25, 2017 2:59 pm
Saruka says...



Hey shima, can you review writers' block?
a lesbian disaster
  





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Tue Dec 05, 2017 8:20 pm
shima says...



Don't know why this got closed (mostly because I was far too frequently busy to review anything.) Anyways - I am opening shop once more.
  





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Wed Dec 27, 2017 9:29 pm
shima says...



Yeah, folks, I am still here. Would like to have some reviews come my way, please.
  





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Sun Jan 21, 2018 2:54 am
camusic says...



Can you review ​https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/camusic/Seltass-first-kill-139222? Not gory I promise and was a fun write so I hope It'll be a good read. I'd rather brutally honest than well not, thanks in advance.
  





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Sun Apr 12, 2020 3:07 pm
shima says...



Not sure if this topic still works (if not, mods, don't be too angry - I'll just create another one) but accepting reviews and whatnot.
Have improved my reviewing skills significantly in the two years I have been away, so be prepared for a rigorous and thorough review of your work. ;-)
  





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Tue Apr 14, 2020 9:36 am
felistia says...



Hi shima.

I'm looking for a long time reviewer for my fantasy\ action\ adventure novel series: Quest for Fire

I've finished writing the first novel of the series and I'm currently on the second novel. Would you be willing to review my first novel and the chapters in my second novel?

If not, please feel free to turn this down. Look forward to your reply.

Book one: chapter one: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter One

Book two: Chapter two: The Quest for Fire - Frozen Past - Chapter One

Best Regards
Felistia.
  





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Tue Apr 14, 2020 12:13 pm
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shima says...



Of course, I would love to review your novel.
Big fantasy nut here, so high-fantasy seems like my piece of cake. :-)
  





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Fri May 01, 2020 5:34 am
Fishr says...



Hello! My work keeps getting heavily edited by myself so at the moment I need opinions! Please and thank you!

Mon Amour (Part I)
  





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Thu May 07, 2020 1:50 pm
shima says...



Sorry for the delay, I was busy. Tried to review it but kinda failed - it appears that you made it for your eyes only?
  





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Wed Oct 14, 2020 6:19 pm
MissGangamash says...



Hey! Could you check out the last two chapters of my novel to get them out of The Green Room? The Rage (Chapter 7)
  





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Sat Oct 17, 2020 2:15 pm
SummerBlues says...



Hi Shima! If you could review my work "The Ocean Is Not An Ocean" (Part 1) haha it would make my day!! It is only around 3k long thank you so much :))
  





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Sat Oct 24, 2020 9:02 pm
omer says...



Hey there! I have a work with no reviews and I really want to know how I can improve my writing. I'd be happy if you could take a look at it! It would be easier to understand by reading the former chapter/s, but that's totally up to you. Here's the link:
Part 4: Water Plus Laptop
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