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Thu Jun 13, 2019 1:20 am
Elinor says...



Hey all,

Because it's summer and I have more time, I want to review your work! I tend to be succinct and focus on big picture, but if there's anything you want me to focus on, feel free to mention it. I'll review pretty much anything except novels at this time, unless I'm able to start from the beginning. Reviews will take 2-3 days, and I'll take a queue of up to 3 at a time. I prefer prose to poetry, and genres like drama/romance/historical fiction to sci-fi or fantasy, and there isn't any content level I'm uncomfortable with.

So get those requests in, and feel free to reach out with questions/requests!

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Thu Jun 13, 2019 2:03 am
LadyVendetta says...



Hey! Would you mind reviewing this poem?
Why, Internet?
Thank you!
Previously xJade
  





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Fri Jun 14, 2019 6:44 pm
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Done! @JadeLotus

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Fri Jun 14, 2019 6:47 pm
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LadyVendetta says...



Thanks again!
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Wed Jul 24, 2019 1:04 am
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Would you please review my new story?https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/LJF/How-To-Say-No-Prologue-145021

Warning: It's pretty dark.
“In order to...apply the teachings of the Aincrad style...keep its secret motto in mind: "stay cool.”-Reki Kawahara
"I’m glad I didn’t die there. I have to go home. I’ve still got things to do.”-Yukako Kabei
  





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Wed Jul 24, 2019 1:08 am
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I certainly can. I'll get to this week :)

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Wed Jul 24, 2019 3:26 pm
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@LJF done :)

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Mon Sep 02, 2019 10:01 am
wetumbrella6 says...



Hi.

I would be glad if you can review the first chapter of my novel named "Jaime".

It is 9k words long.

Here's the link to it:

Jaime (working title) chapter 1

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Mon Sep 09, 2019 1:24 am
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@wetumbrella6

Hey there, sorry for the delay, I'm only just now seeing this. It says the work is private so I can't see it. 9K words is also a bit long so I'll happily look at it if you break it up into smaller chapters. :)

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Tue Oct 01, 2019 1:02 am
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Fishr says...



Hi Elinor!

It’s not quite completed but I could use a second pair of eyes for its expansion. Thank you!

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Tue Oct 01, 2019 2:24 pm
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Alll done @Fishr!

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Wed Oct 02, 2019 12:44 am
Fishr says...



Thank you! It was very helpful. Thank you again for taking time out of your day to help me out.

(Sheepish smile) May I request another review? I’m not sure if it is too long to post all in one sitting but I wasn’t sure the best way to break it up without hurting the flow. I hope it doesn’t end up being too daunting.
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Wed Oct 02, 2019 12:52 am
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@Fishr I’m leaving on a 2 week vacation tomorrow so I won’t have the time to look at it before then, I can definitely look at it after I get back!

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Wed Oct 02, 2019 12:57 am
Fishr says...



Happy vacation! Thank you again!
  








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