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Fri Dec 14, 2018 7:45 pm
Aranya says...



Hi Mea!!

Could you pls review this slam poem on Gay Love ?? :)
Honey and Sunshine

Shall always be ready to help you in any form!!

Thank you so much!!
  





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Tue Dec 18, 2018 4:58 am
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Mea says...



@Traves - done! My sincere apologies for the delay, I hope the review can still be useful.

@Aranya - I'm afraid I'm going to decline to review your poem. I just don't think I could be very helpful to you, as I don't really like slam poetry and have never tried writing it. I'm also not that comfortable with the topic of the poem and would have difficulty reviewing it impartially. Sorry I couldn't be of more help, and feel free to request a review on a different piece, or ask someone else here in the Will Review for Food forum to review your poem. :)
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Tue Dec 18, 2018 12:17 pm
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Traves says...



Thanks for that helpful review @Mea , because of it I wrote another draft which was so drastically changed that I published it separately instead of editing the original post.
No more tears (Draft 3.0)
I'd again like your criticism on it, and my questions remain the same.
If you need something reviewed I'm more than willing.

Thanks a lot!
  





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Fri Dec 21, 2018 9:02 pm
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Horisun says...



Could you review a short story I wrote called The Brink? It ends in tragically, just a heads up.
  





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Thu May 02, 2019 2:29 pm
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Leviari says...



Here's my poem:
maybe I am not unhappy

Thank you!
  





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Wed May 22, 2019 9:46 pm
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Featherstone says...



Hello! I'm looking for some more feedback on my essay discussing the dark side of beauty and how American enculturation impacts Americans' view of it.

Thanks for your time!
"All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost."
  





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Wed Jun 05, 2019 12:15 am
Saichi says...



Link to Piece: The Origin: Prologue
Type of Piece (Whether it's a novel, poetry, etc): It's a novel
Age rating: 12+
Any other comments (Optional):Would be a great help! Thank you so much!
  





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Mon Jun 10, 2019 12:25 am
Mea says...



@Saichi - I went to go review your piece, but it says it's currently saved as a draft. You'll need to publish it before I can see it to review it. If you need extra points to re-publish it just let me know and I'll help you out. (It shouldn't cost points if you've already published it once, but there's a weird bug that won't let you re-publish it without having 200 points, though it doesn't take those points when you do). Alternatively, I'd be happy to review a different piece of yours!

Sorry it took me so long to respond to this request - just let me know when you've published it and I'll have a review for you within the day.
We're all stories in the end.

I think of you as a fairy with a green dress and a flower crown and stuff.
-EternalRain

I think you, @Deanie and I are like the Three Book Nerd Musketeers of YWS.
-bluewaterlily
  





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Tue Aug 13, 2019 7:45 pm
rosette says...



I'd appreciate your thoughts on this. :]

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