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Sat Sep 13, 2014 4:20 pm
Noelle says...



Reopened! (not that it was ever really closed, I just neglected it. Poor baby)

Who needs a review?
Noelle is the name, reviewing and writing cliffhangers is the game.

Writer of fantasy, action/adventure, and magic. Huzzah!

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Sun Sep 14, 2014 9:18 am
SpeedyPencil says...



Hi I'd love if you could review my short story here: Queen Bee- any critique welcome
Scissors cuts paper, paper covers rock, rock crushes lizard, lizard poisons Spock, Spock smashes scissors, scissors decapitates lizard, lizard eats paper, paper disproves Spock, Spock vaporizes rock, and as it always has, rock crushes scissors.
  





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Wed Sep 17, 2014 5:55 pm
Pompadour says...



Noelle!! If you could leave one of your lovely reviews on this: Elementární ~ 1.1 *adjusted* (and 1.2 if you have the time), I'd really appreciate it! ^^

<3 Thanks!
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Tue Sep 30, 2014 7:34 pm
rhiasofia says...



Hey there!

I could really use a review on one or both of these. The first one has no reviews, and the second only has one :(. Thanks!

Autotonomy and Apoptosis

Hydrolysis
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Mon Oct 06, 2014 2:37 pm
Sins says...



Noelleeeeee, heeeeeey!

I've started (trying) to write my novel again, and if I remember correctly you read and reviewed several of the chapters when I first started posting it way back when. I've written a new second chapter for it, so I'd really appreciate it if you could take a look.

The Boy Who Broke Mirrors - Chapter Two

Thanks, and of course I shall return the favour the second you ask me!
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Thu Oct 23, 2014 5:25 am
beans says...



Please get me out of the green room :(

Ascension Chapter 5
  





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Sat Oct 25, 2014 2:25 am
catcha01 says...



Hi Noelle! I hope that you're well. I was wondering if you could review one of the following, you can choose:
Winter
The Musical Composition of Life
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Mon Jun 08, 2015 11:36 am
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After months and months of neglect, I'm reopening my thread. Just in time for summer so I can over commit myself to things and actually get them done :3
Noelle is the name, reviewing and writing cliffhangers is the game.

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Fri Jun 12, 2015 12:19 pm
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artybirdy says...



@Noelle

I have a poem I need some feedback on. It's called Father Doesn't Like The Noise *Edited*

TRIGGER WARNING: CONTENT ABOUT ABUSE

Let me know if you're able to review it.

Thanks!
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Fri Jun 12, 2015 2:17 pm
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cookie64 says...



:) If you want, you can review my story.

The Clock Remembrances- Chapter 2 ~does~ :D Thanks
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Thu Jul 30, 2015 9:17 am
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Lightsong says...



Please review my story chapter. :D Bad Lights, Good Lights (Chapter One Point Two)
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Wed Aug 05, 2015 6:58 am
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Lightsong says...



I'm satisfied with youre review so please review my novel again. :D Bad Lights, Good Lights (Chapter One Point Three)
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The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Sat Dec 26, 2015 3:12 pm
Noelle says...



It's that time of year again! Who needs a review?
Noelle is the name, reviewing and writing cliffhangers is the game.

Writer of fantasy, action/adventure, and magic. Huzzah!

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Sat Dec 26, 2015 3:40 pm
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Lightsong says...



Hey! Please review this School Kids poem of mine. It only has one review. :( Like it if you like it! :D
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The subject is a catalyst, a character, but our responsibility is, has to be, to the work."

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Sat Dec 26, 2015 5:30 pm
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Arcticus says...



Hey,

I need some harsh criticism on this one and I think it needs more editing. If you can find some time to take a look at it, I would truly appreciate that.

Untitled Novel : [Chapter 3: Somewhat Vegetarian]
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It's been many years since I had such an exemplary vegetable.
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