This is a short idea for one of my RP characters, please give me feedback of what I could improve. But I hope you enjoy! (If you like this, please press the like button)
Lance ran through the woods, the Garak sprinting behind him. He jumped over a fallen tree, trying to give the creature the slip. A giant snap echoed through the woods behind him as the Garak ripped through the tree as if it were only paper and continued its rampage after him.
Lance went around another tree and broke into a clearing filled with fallen trees. He jumped over several trees and got to the other side before the Garak broke into the clearing. The creature growled and started walking towards him.
The Garak stood roughly 9 feet tall, had narrow slitted eyes with purple pupils. It’s body was about the thickness of a tree trunk and had long arms with claws as long as my arm. Saliva dripped from its mouth, making small pools in its wake. Lance placed his hands in front of him, and spoke the words of the ancient language.
“Feira Adamanet!” A small whirlwind of fire surrounded him as a sword appeared in a flash of flame. Reivna was its name, and it was one of the only ones left of the Thirteen Swords of the Guardians of Theronas.
The Garak immediately understood the power difference, but didn’t seem like it cared. It lashed out at Lance with one of its claws and tore a tree trunk in half as Lance jumped over its arm. He brought Reivna up and summoned magic.
“Feira Valo!” he shouted. A fireball shot out of the end of the sword and towards the Garak’s face.
The creature roared in agony as the flame hit its mark, turning the Garak’s face soot black. It stumbled backwards, wiping at it’s face. Lance took this moment and charged towards the Garak. He side-stepped a wild swing and cut through its arm, leaving a huge gash.
Howling in pain, it went into a frenzy, swinging its arms wildly. Lance dodged a swing and spun the sword over his head, slicing in between the creatures calves. The Garak dropped to its knees as its legs gave out.
Lance raised Reivna and brought it down in an arc, decapitating the creature. Its body rolled to the side, as motionless as the forest around him. He recalled Reivna and turned away from the body.
Why did it chase me? Lance thought to himself. The Garak was the guardian of the sanctuary of The Thirteen Guardians. Something must have made it go insane.
Lance suddenly felt a presence across the clearing and saw a man. He was equipped in ice blue armor, had a two-handed sword strapped across his back, and steel ice eyes.
“Xalor...” Lance cursed under his breath. This might not be a fight he could win...
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