Omg, that was seriously the best story I read. Write more.
This could be better, but it’s pretty good for your age.
Good story, but the grammar was terrible. Let me begin…
I hate it.
The plot is shallow and clichéd, the characters are despicable, and I didn’t find it interesting at all.
TIGERSPRITE wrote:Nice post. Unfortunately, I've had about three not very helpful comments, and stumbled upon a few more. I sent a PM to one of the offenders, asking him to be more detailed next time. TIGERSPRITE
Wonderwoman wrote:I will try to uphold my rights in critique. Also, I have a question. Why don't some poems not rhyme? I always have mine rhyme. Is there a certain thing I can look up too see how those work? Also if I can't say "I love it" and "I hate it" and correct grammar or capitalization; what can I comment on?
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