I enjoy writing dark comedies, and the protagonist is often a sarcastic kind of person. Even when they narrate, the tone is very snarky.
But one common complaint I get when people read my First person stories, is that the narrator is often emotionally detached from the situation he's talking about.
In order to solve that problem, I change the stories from having a sarcastic character narrating the story, to just having a sarcastic third person narrator. But I still feel I should try to improve on this. Any tips?
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