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Elemental Cycle- Fireborn



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Thu Dec 01, 2011 12:00 am
sylverdawn says...



I am currently writing a Fantasy Novel titled, Elemental Cycle- Fireborn.
I have six chapters completed and just posted the new draft of chapter 1.
Please review it, I need all the help I can get.

Here's the link to the thread.
topic64968.html

For those who enjoy what they read, PM me and chapter 2 will be posted next week.
DANCE- Like no-one is watching
LOVE- Like you've never been hurt
SING- Like no-one is listening
LIVE- Like it's heaven on earth.

Please read and review my novel. The title is Fireborn. Here's the link.

novel.php?id=1157
  





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Thu Dec 01, 2011 2:56 am
Rosendorn says...



Heya! This actually isn't the place to ask for reviews. That's Will Review for Food. :) However, even in that forum general requests like this aren't allowed. You have to ask only a few people to review at a time.

If you want to turn this into a thread where you get critique in the idea, plot, ect, let me know and I'll unlock this. But, for now, this is locked.
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.
  








It is only a novel... or, in short, only some work in which the greatest powers of the mind are displayed, in which the most thorough knowledge of human nature, the happiest delineation of its varieties, the liveliest effusions of wit and humour, are conveyed to the world in the best-chosen language
— Jane Austen, Northanger Abbey