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Tue Feb 15, 2011 12:00 am
ANate13 says...



What's the general opinon of a story with this basis:

There's a seperate "dimension/world/reality" connected to ours that is purely imagination. It is affected by acts of the imaginations. In this world, since Shakespeare was the great writer he was, there was a profound effect upon this world. This story would assume that Shakespeare used a different pen for every one of his famous works, and these pens have become powerful artifacts. For example, the one used for Romeo and Juliet has the abilities with romance. The Midsummer Night's Dream pen would allow you to control fairies, etc.

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Tue Feb 15, 2011 1:18 am
Kale says...



Interesting premise, and there's a lot of potential for expansion.
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Tue Feb 15, 2011 9:05 pm
ANate13 says...



Okay, that's one person. If it seems confusing and half-baked, that's because I wanted to get the idea across without giving away to much. And I'm terrible at doing that.
The Bard Chronicles: http://youngwriterssociety.com/novel.php?id=1134

Master of Words: novel.php?id=1039

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Did you ever hear the Tragedy of Darth Plagueis the wise? I thought not. It's not a story the Jedi would tell you. It's a Sith legend. Darth Plagueis was a Dark Lord of the Sith, so powerful and so wise he could use the Force to influence the midichlorians to create life... He had such a knowledge of the dark side that he could even keep the ones he cared about from dying. The dark side of the Force is a pathway to many abilities some consider to be unnatural. He became so powerful... the only thing he was afraid of was losing his power, which eventually, of course, he did. Unfortunately, he taught his apprentice everything he knew, then his apprentice killed him in his sleep. It's ironic he could save others from death, but not himself.
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