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Posted first chapter of book! :)



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Wed Jan 05, 2011 2:12 am
YoungNate8 says...



I posted the first chapter of my new Fantasy book Fallen Civilization it mixes action and made junk I made up my self every thing in this first chapter is my own creation except for the names of certain songs,and gaming consoles
  





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Mon Jan 10, 2011 5:22 am
WritersUnleashed says...



*slaps*
1.Your on a writing forum. Not a gaming one. Capatalize your titles.
2.Where are your periods?
3.This really isn't an advertising forum.
4.My lord, this story is the same grammer.
  








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