I posted the first chapter of my new Fantasy book Fallen Civilization it mixes action and made junk I made up my self every thing in this first chapter is my own creation except for the names of certain songs,and gaming consoles
*slaps* 1.Your on a writing forum. Not a gaming one. Capatalize your titles. 2.Where are your periods? 3.This really isn't an advertising forum. 4.My lord, this story is the same grammer.
I was weeping as much for him as her; we do sometimes pity creatures that have none of the feeling either for themselves or others. — Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights
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