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Some Imagery?



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Fri Dec 03, 2010 7:22 pm
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SakuraFallsSweetly♥ says...



Hey, need help for an English short story about a snowball fight in school haha. I need imagery if you could help that'd be cool thanks :P Some similes and metaphors maybe, and vivid descriptions of Walking through the street in the snow Christmas shopping. Lol. I don't like this essay, I just need a little help on it :D
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Rosendorn says...



What sort of imagery are you looking for? Metaphors, descriptions, similes? Each have different connotations.
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