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The Shades Of The Heart



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Tue May 18, 2010 7:01 am
spike71294 says...



I am re-writing my novel 'The heart of the god' and I have also renamed it into 'The shades of the heart'.
The two chapters that I had posted of the heart of a god have been loved very much but it's structure wasn't right for me.
Now I each chapter is narrated by a different character and not by only the hero.
I just hope that it's loved equally as before *fingers crossed*.

Check it out for yourself and compare

Shades of the heart ch 1
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Heart of a god ch1 +intro
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