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Fri Jan 15, 2010 12:16 am
Wolfdaemon says...



hi everyone! wolf here, i have this idea about two twins, i love the story, i was just wondering if YOU would read it.

its set in medieval/futuristic settings, such as swords and what not, with paved roads and technology, kind of like city of ember, its after a war.

it is ACTION-PACKED alot of tense moments and awkward pauses after painful truths.

it has a dark setting, alot of dry humor and uncomfortable bluntness.

sort of sad, but still has humor.

ummm, i think it has a CRRRRAAAZYYY twist at the end, its a pretty curvy story.

i don't know exactly what its about.
Spoiler! :
i know one of the twins becomes an assassin and one a mage. the two groups, in my story, are the government, like democrats and republicans, sort of. they are mortal enemies. the problem is, how can the twins be mortal enemies?
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Rosendorn says...



We'd be able to get a better idea of what the story is if you give us more detail. How are the characters like? What are some more details on the world? What challenges do they face at certain points of the plot? Answering those questions in more detail will help us get an understanding of your idea. :)
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