Uh, anyway. So, what do you guys think about these novel ideas?
(Just hoping to get a second opinion here)
The War As I See It:
This is about the World War II set in the Philippines where there was this 4 year old girl and what she thought of the war. You know, like how a kid would feel if she was in a war with all these Japanese soldiers threatening to kill them and stuff like that.
The Missing Light:
This is a fantasy world where in this place, all of the royal blood in Azgalor (the name of the kingdom there) have to undergo a "Rite of Passage" to the "Black Heart" once they start gaining their powers. They need to give a portion of their powers to the black heart so that if ever evil forces would come to destroy their kingdom, they could defend theirselves with the use of the black heart. Then comes a princess who is more powerful than the heart. The people fear her and they force the king and queen to kill her. To save her life, they let the princess live in hiding as a peasant in a far away village until an evil villain comes and steals the black heart and now the search begins for the powerful princess which the people disowned at first.
Nine Months of Love:
Stacy Ferill is eleven years old and her mom died giving birth to her. She just lived with her dad and somehow she still feels empty. One day, she discovers her mom's stuff and a crusty old diary which her mom was writing in for 9 months and reading it page by page she felt nine months worth of love her mom gave her, that she would risk her own life, battling a life-threatening disease just to give her a chance to live.
I've still got a lot more, but before I continue I just want to have somce comments maybe on how to make it better once they're all done so I could work on the rest which I've have pre-outlined already.
So, what do you think? Did I cut it?
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