Well, I've been planning on re-writing something I wrote a long time ago, because it had possibility. It only got to 50 pages originally, but, hey, that's the point of re-writing, right?
Anyway, the problem with it was, that, well, back then, I thought that vampires were sooo cool, and so decided to write a couple in (Eli Goldberg, James Harding, and Amaria Stepples, to give names). That wasn't enough, so I got the MC's older sister to fall for James, and then a lot of tension because the MC stumbles upon him draining an accountant, he's still in love with Amaria, and the house-across-the-road-neighbor, Anguta, is in love with the MC's sister.
Note, I did not read Twilight before or during this thing. But now, I just feel like everybody's going to say 'It's too much like Twilight!'
So, to combat this, I've decided to change the vampires into some other creature... And this is where I'm stumped. What else feeds on humans, are stronger-than-normal, have an aversion to sunlight (it makes them rapidly age in my world, while blood makes them young), and will not make people send angry mail with the heading 'It's too much like Twilight!'
I mean, I could change a couple of the aspects, but yeah.
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