To begin with, I need a little help...
Here is the first paragraph:
The open cart creaked incessantly as it bumped and rattled its way over the windswept moor. The five prisoners, who were seated in the tray and bound by chains, gazed dully at their surroundings. Their thoughts were muddled, they felt confused and alone, their future is uncertain. One of the prisoners found tears slipping down his cheeks as he began to remember how the week had started, before the sentence.
However it will be odd to change it to first person after this, so if I wrote it in first in the first place (lol), it would be like this:
The open cart creaks incessantly as it bumps and rattles its way over the windswept moor. I am one of five prisoners, who are seated in the tray and bound by chains. The others are gazing dully at their surroundings. Their thoughts are probably muddled, and like me, they must feel confused and alone as our future is uncertain. I find tears slipping down my own cheeks as I begin to remember how the week had started, before the sentence.
I've never been very good at knowing what person to write in (or what each one is actually! ), so I hope someone can help me out here!
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