Firstly, I am curious if there is a legitimate reason why a city wouldn't allow anyone to leave its borders. Now, I'm sure if there is one, it has to do with money.... but for the life of me, I am stuck on this! Why would this law be instated? Right now I have that no one can leave the city and that there is a government-sponsered illusion surrounding it that makes it look like a wasteland outside. But the fake reason the government tells people in the city still has to seem reasonable to the majority of the people, and has to be a cover up for their real motive.
In my story, one of the major obstacles the main characters encounter are what I currently have written in my notes as "zombies." Now, they aren't zombies really; in my 'verse, magic operates off the life force of the person with it. But, most people that have magic don't know how to "turn it off" in this particular region, so it just runs constantly and depletes their "soul." When they get down to a certain point, they can literally absorb other people's souls; but those with agressive, or attack kind of magics end up going crazy from their survival instinct, and turn cannibalistic. Most of them just lumber around until they are killed, trying to literally "eat souls," although there are some "packs." But that's not important. What I could use some help on is figuring out what to call them--they're still alive, still semi-cognitive(and they grow more and more lucid as they "eat more souls" ), cannibalistic, and have pack instincts. I'm not sure of any pre-existing creature like this, so I'm unsure of what I should name them. More details can be give if it would help.
And finally, I need a little help with the matter of restoring a soul that's been "eaten." Since magic is viewed as "only negative" PREDOMINANTLY in my story, I'm curious how I can do it without it seeming cheesy or too convenient.
Yep. It would be nice if I could get some answers on this, haha.
Also, if anyone is interested in hearing the whole plot and offering some critique on it, just let me know and I'll PM it to you.
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