I have been thinking about this plot for well over 5 months, I cannot seem to get it out of my head. I would love opinions and suggestions. The only trouble I have is writing it…I tend to get writer’s block a lot. But, I know if I set a goal I can do it. So tell me what you think?
Demons and angels have been in a war for eons, still are to this very day. Descendants of the devil are appearing more quickly than ever and are given orders to smite all living messengers of the good. Demetrius, nephew of Satan, is sent to earth to help out. Maribelle, an unknowing angelic being, is daughter of the two highest angels that are stationed on earth. But, her parents have yet to tell her so, she’s in for a big surprise when they suddenly disappear.
Demetrius is searching for Mari’s parents because they are his biggest priority to deal with. He bumps into Mari and realizing who she is he instinctively attacks her. Maribelle is lost and has a knife to his neck, asking multiple questions. Having the ability to go to different places in a blink of an eye, Demetrius goes to the one place he knows he belongs.
Satan is informed of Maribelle and orders Demetrius to destroy her, he obeys the command. Maribelle is still stumped and looks through her parent’s bedroom, trying to find anything that would tell her something. She comes across a (thing that gives her information of where her parents are) and a note next to the bed stand. It’s written on front and back addressed to her, it explains everything. Maribelle finally gets why Demetrius is after her and wants to learn to fight back (which she will get help from a mentor that her parents told her to go to) She leaves her social life behind her friends and all and goes into an unknown world to mortals.
The demons of the earth begin creating complete chaos (controlling volcanoes, natural disasters, convincing mere humans to join them, transforming people into demon form) ← the demon thing I am still thinking about (like how they look)
I was planning on adding a little romance but, not a HUGE complete one. Because, I think those kind of books are cliche I’ll find a way to make it exciting and invigorating. (=
Remember this is still in thought process, lol I come up with new things everyday for this story.
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