Okay, so I had this story I wrote last year. I liked it pretty well, but now it needs to be redrafted and reworked (plotline doesn't quite work for me anymore). So basically here's the idea:
MC is a girl who is a senior in high school. Her best friend commited suicide. MC (she needs a new name, but for now we'll just call her MC) is having a really rough time with this due to circumstances later revealed in the story. Her other best friends had been all growing apart over the past year or two so she doesn't have them. MC is highly stressed and ends up running out of school one day and into oncoming traffic (or something, I need a realistic and noncorny way for her to get knocked out.). She wakes up and sees a guy waiting for a bus, she ends up getting on the bus and going to who knows where. The bus driver is this pretty eccentric guy and MC ends up learning a lot about life and faith (yes it is christianity based you could say). She ends up getting off and can live her life better. But she finds that the whole bus ride never happened, or did it?
So that's the basic idea. It sort of has that cliche 'woke up from a dream' thing to it, but its not really like that. Let me know if anyone would actually read it, or how I could maybe make it better so someone would read it.
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