z

Young Writers Society


I need... advice.



User avatar



Gender: Female
Points: 300
Reviews: 0
Sat Feb 28, 2009 1:17 pm
in_a_blue_moon says...



It's this idea I've had for a story. Well, it's really a thought.
Have you ever wondered why some people say, as a joke, that the world revolves around them? Well, what if it didn't exactly revolve around you, but it was sort of... yours? What if everything like history, water, aliens, myths, everything we know - what if that was all made just for you, the one person? What if your destiny was played out like, say, a movie? What if nothing is real at all, just an illusion or something like that? What happens when you die? Do you? Or are you suspended in space forever, until your new world is created for you?
And... what if life is just a game played by the creator of your world and you? What if they got "game over"? What would happen then?
It's really weird. Kept me up the past two nights (with the help of the possum in the roof, grr!). But it'd be a killer fantasy book, if I say so myself. What do you think?
  





User avatar
20 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 825
Reviews: 20
Sat Feb 28, 2009 2:23 pm
SheepMonoxide says...



I'd so read that. :O LOL. =D
“Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart.” - William Wordsworth

"A fool thinks himself to be wise, but a wise man knows himself to be a fool."
- William Shakespeare


I do believe in fairies... I do! I do!!
  





User avatar
106 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 5749
Reviews: 106
Sat Feb 28, 2009 2:41 pm
Flux says...



WRITE THIS! I love weird, really I do. Anything complicated or strange, I like it. I've wanted to write something strange, and this would be the 'something strange' that would be along the lines of what I'd want to write.

Please go through with this. It could be very intresting.

~La Reina!
"Man is least himself when he talks in his own person.

Give him a mask and he will tell you the truth."

-- Oscar Wilde
  





User avatar
260 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 13389
Reviews: 260
Sat Feb 28, 2009 5:42 pm
zankoku_na_tenshi says...



Wow, that does sounds really interesting. I definitely like the idea, and if it was well-written and the characters were likable, I'd definitely read it.

So yeah, if the idea interests you, you should totally go on and write it.
"The world is not beautiful, therefore, it is." --Kino's Journey

Hey, how about a free review?
  





User avatar
2631 Reviews

Supporter


Gender: Female
Points: 6235
Reviews: 2631
Sat Feb 28, 2009 6:04 pm
Rydia says...



*Moved to Writers Corner*
Writing Gooder

~Previously KittyKatSparklesExplosion15~

The light shines brightest in the darkest places.
  





User avatar
80 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 890
Reviews: 80
Sun Mar 01, 2009 5:16 am
Jay says...



It's not something I would read or write personally. I love philosophy and existential discussions, just not mixed in with my fiction. It's just not my cup of tea.
  





User avatar
115 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 1422
Reviews: 115
Mon Mar 02, 2009 3:07 am
mhmmcolleenx0 says...



Sounds interesting. I'd read it, you should write it.
"Can't stop, won't stop. I must be dreaming."
  





User avatar
36 Reviews



Gender: None specified
Points: 1190
Reviews: 36
Wed Mar 04, 2009 10:56 pm
ankhirke says...



Oh solipsism. Read about it: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Solipsism
It's kind of a demented form of self-centered exisentialist idealist monism.
A certain anime immediately comes to mind: the Melancholy of Suzumiya Haruka.

Definitely an interesting idea.
  





User avatar
239 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 7829
Reviews: 239
Wed Mar 04, 2009 11:26 pm
MeadowLark says...



Ooh! This sounds interesting but kinda weird o_O

It sounds complicated and strange but that is an awesome duo (in my opinion). Go ahead and write this. I would read it...Well as long as it is a fantasy ^_^

Meadow
Purple light in the canyon
that is where I long to be
With my three good companions
just my rifle, pony and me

--- "My Rifle My Pony and Me"
  





User avatar
541 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 370
Reviews: 541
Thu Mar 05, 2009 12:06 am
Lauren2010 says...



Sounds sweet. You should run with it. Write it well and you'll get people to read it. People love that weird out of the ordinary type thing. At least I do.
Got YWS?
  





User avatar
16 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 890
Reviews: 16
Thu Mar 05, 2009 12:58 am
cammie4 says...



Write it, write it, write it! This sounds uber-interesting and I would so read it! Let me know if you post it, because I am so anxious to read it, that is, if you write it. Which you definitely should.
  





User avatar



Gender: Female
Points: 300
Reviews: 0
Sat Mar 07, 2009 9:42 pm
Katiferthecat says...



Sounds really good to me! Especially if it's kept u up for the past few nights haha! I would soo read that! :D
  








An arrow can only be shot by pulling it backwards. So when life is dragging you back with difficulties, it means that life's going to launch you into something great, so just focus and keep aiming.
— Unknown