Hey I could really use help with any suggestions at all for my novel, I want it as well as I can get it.
Characters:
Leon Starfire (trying to think of new last name), Ray (need last name), Serena White, and Cassandra Grant are all the "good" guys. Uncle Chris dies at the beginning, but is good, not evil.
Evil characters are Scorpius and Capricorn. (looking for more evil people, especially a female).
Prologue:
I have this written I'll post it later. Anyways, the 'Scarred Man' or Scorpius, murders Leo's parents just after his mother blessed him with a sacred ribbon with a magical encryptment written on it to protect Leo.
Beginning:
The beginning starts off with Leo witnesses his uncle's death. (I hope this works as the hookish way I want it too).
Possibly a book spoiler if this happens:
[spoiler]Ending: The main character and his enemy both live, both nearly dieing, but Serena is kidnapped and Capricorn left dead.[/spoiler]
Any comments, questions, threats, concerns, bribes, reviews, ideas, etc...? Please, I could use the help here! Thanks <3
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