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Cal's Fanmix & Proper Critique Central [Edited 10/23/10]



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Sun Jan 24, 2010 7:42 pm
Caligula's Launderette says...



I think I have some of it critiqued, I just never posted it.

;)

I have also updated my Critiques List [1/24/10].

- Cal.
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Wed Jan 27, 2010 2:53 am
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Updated PC list. 1/26/10
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Tue Feb 02, 2010 9:43 pm
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Proper Critiques Posted 02/02/10
    Kylan: heart dissection // impression #2: les pêches (peaches) // impression #1: les gens de la ville (cityfolk)
    PenguinAttack: Incisive Coalition
    Jasmine Hart: Robins
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Thu Feb 04, 2010 11:31 pm
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Proper Critiques In-Progress Added 02/04/10
    Kylan: Romanov // picture of an old cowboy dying in the city
    LavenderBlue: Alice: Chapter One
    NaRachel: Delm(searching for a better title) chapter "Generosity"
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Thu Feb 04, 2010 11:53 pm
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Proper Critiques Posted 02/04/10
    Writersdomain: An Excerpt from Shrive
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Sun Feb 07, 2010 9:19 pm
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Proper Critiques In-Progress Added 02/07/10
    CaitlinGrant: Under a Bright Blue Sky
    captain.classy: Papillion (1)
    Evi: Rentre á la Maison
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Tue Feb 09, 2010 11:38 pm
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Proper Critiques In-Progress Added 02/09/10
    FlyingInEbony: "Insomnia", a small character analysis
    Sophia_x: Prologue and Ch. 1 (part 1) - The Spirits
    Springs616: Cursed
    Stori: "Sepia" Rewrite
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Sun Mar 07, 2010 12:30 am
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Proper Critiques Posted 03/06/10
    Writersdomain: Shrive: Prologue // Shrive: Chapter 1
    NaRachel: Delm(searching for a better title) chapter "Generosity"
    Dreamworx95: Of Jinn and Devil
    LavenderBlue: Alice: Chapter One
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Mon May 24, 2010 11:41 pm
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Proper Critiques Posted 05/24/10
    CaitlinGrant: Under a Bright Blue Sky
    captain.classy: Papillion (1)
    Evi: Rentre á la Maison
    FlyingInEbony: "Insomnia", a small character analysis
    Kylan: Romanov // picture of an old cowboy dying in the city
    Sophia_x: Prologue and Ch. 1 (part 1) - The Spirits
    Springs616: Cursed
    Stori: "Sepia" Rewrite
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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Sun Nov 07, 2010 12:58 am
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Proper Critique Posteds 10/30/01
    blackbird: Marie Antoinette
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
[Diefenbaker whines]
Fraser: You're an Arctic Wolf, for God's sake.
(Due South)

Hatter: Do I need a reason to help a pretty girl in a very wet dress? (Alice)

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