Epilogues?
While laboring over certain, evil scenes in Tears, I've been thinking about writing an epilogue for Flames. Both Flames and Tears are narrated by King Lucien - king of Kalinth who rules two generations after the story in Flames and Tears and who has hte gift of looking into the past. If there were to be any other stories after Tears, one would include him.
I've been thinking about writing an epilogue that included him at the end of Flames, just to finish the story off. I would also want to include this scene with Strick and Jaistin (the one I used for dialogue challenge #1), because the relation between Strick and Jaistin is a direct foil for the character of Coglia in Tears. So... I'm not sure yet, but I might be writing an epilogue in my spare time.
If I wrote an epilogue for Flames, I could use something similar for the epilogue of Tears - end it off with King Lucien and his cousin who throws things at him. Hmmm, not sure, but a good idea? I don't know.
Tears of Lecraesa
How is it going? A little better - I'm getting through it scene by scene, though I'm beginning to worry about time constraints already. Eventwise, the end of Tears is in sight, ut I still have tons of character growth to include. Liehne has to give into the Queen and almost kill her son before she regains her memory. Creiha needs to grow up more. I need to emphasize Nalien's hatred for Kalinth so it can come to a breaking point near the end. It's just... overwhelming. Not to mention Strick has miles to go before I'll let him rejoin the group. Grar. I am frightened of the huge task before me...
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