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«Under the Palm Tree»
PREMISE
Levan and Emyros are two 'friends' who live in the idyll lands of Greater Eden. The two are adolescents who are about to grow as young adults through a sacred passage of rite. However, everything changes under a palm tree.

After activating the awakening of an ancient force know as 'the Bee', Greater Eden is in danger and the two boys are forced to go into the Areas of Lesser Eden, where dangerous demons and perilous humans who seek revenge.

Using the Bee as a helper of their perilous quest, Levan and Emyros return to Greater Eden to find that they were too late... Or did something happen?

Who or what exactly is the Bee? Why was Greater Eden not like before when the two boys left? Who or what caused it? Explore the World of Greater Eden and Lesser Eden with Levan and Emyros as the two search for their arcane truths.
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TABLE OF CONTENTS

000 - The Awakening of the Bee
001 - That One Damned Tree
002 - Off to Lesser Eden!
003 - ○X of Aperion
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The Awakening of the Bee

She was the greatest of all times
The daughter of the Lightning
And the son of fierious red flames
They were both a he and a she

The Bee's identity was like water
Becoming frozen when cold
And vanishing when it was hot
Yet at times they would be visible

He raised his scepter in judgment
And slashed the wicked liars
The usurpers had given up crowns
As they praised her under a tree

The palm tree she symbolizes
The Bee was adorned and praised
Until the humans had revolted
And sealed her into dark demise
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A palm tree holds a beehive
Flowers bloom below
Children run across the tree
But the adults warn a tale

"Don't knock the beehive"
They alerted the tykes
But two boys ignored heeds
Tumbling into a flower garden

And the green light glows
Screams fill the Great Eden
Demons come and run havoc
For they come for revenge

The two boys run for life
Warriors protect citizens
Angels were flying across
"Protect the humans!"

So friend, we all ran away
Into the red forest of blood
But some were not alive
As the demons have slain

This night is filled with chaos.
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Off to mysterious Eden
Where God abandoned
Into the mysterious Eden
Where monsters dwell

The flourished land is dim
Light and color escaped
Drained away by mischief
Stolen by an evil trickster

Off to peculiar Less Eden
Where humans still shreik
To prison named Less Eden
Where prisoners mourn

Nothing but desolation
The void recipes, with demons
Sinners are thrown in plains
Where the sky is to be purple

Glowing supernatural light
And a blue moon rises
Two boys venture perils
In order to redeem themselves

The Bee shall guide the two
As an act of fulfillment
The others are to wait
And watch the adventures

Of the two boys exploring
This new mysterious world
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The Beast who guards the Fortress,
Guardians and Father of all demons.
His name strikes terror even to him,
Warriors have cried to gods for help.

The Ox of Aperion, that's his new name
The entrance to Inferno is guarded
By his mighty claymore and axe
Laughing triumphantly and feasting blood

When two boys saw him, neither
Had trembled with fright
But stood with courage as the Goddess
Of Strength sang a ballad of healing

And struck the beast with their swords
With the victory, came back to their homes.
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DESOLATE HOME

When was home ever this vacant,
Ghosts wandering and howling,
The dogs barking and eating flesh
And fires dancing all over?

When was our home destroyed,
Pillaged by wicked robbers,
Raiders have no right to be
Remembered about their life?

Who is it, who are you knocking
The Bee has no words and weeps
For her people have fallen,
Just as how a prophecy once said.

Now the two boys are truly orphans
Sheltered and warmed by blazing flames.
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Descent to Reality

The Bee hovers over the virtual world
Of demons, gods, and false heroes
Where a spiritual battle can tear
The fabrics of reality and our home

So she had chosen his favorite ones
Made by their own hands, her mouth
Words came out and she built with
Dirt and clay, humans were made

He named them one by one
Making each and every special like me
One was a boy another was a girl
And she spilled the potion of love

Blessing as a departing gift from her
Humans could multiply fruitfully
But the Bee had to hide away from
The demons who chased him behind.
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Havilah

El Dorado
the golden city
in midst of light
there it stood

to find a dream
to chase a lie
is like grabbing
the swift wind

flying birds and
crawling beasts
guard the ruins
of the dead ones

yo shall not pass
they said
but it was a lie
two boys did it
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Goliath

An ancient tale once said
When the heavens descend
A part of its hivemind came
And gifted mankind its child

And those children were
Nothing but destructive giants
Monsters that knew the taste
Of blood and rotten flesh

The Giant of Havilah
Who stands on two cliffs
As a river flows beyond him
It rains arrows and spears

The elders warned children
Not to get near the monster
Lest they would be crushed
Or worse, eaten alive.
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Bonus - Sword of Oblivion

Who are you?
What is your name?
What are you?
What is it?

I've forgotten your name
Yet my hands touch you
Your cold, heaviness
Handles with jewels

The long tooth of yours
The sharp blade that gleams
By the moonlight,
And even the sun shines

You're still forgotten
But I'll keep this moment
Very special to you.
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Victory

Competition has only one winner
Not two nor three, numero uno
Choose: Do you want to win
Or succumb to humiliating defeat?

Your choice is yours, I say
My choice is mine, you say
Choose carefully what you do
It carves our Fates like pumpkins

Victory is served in a chalice
Drink from it, sweet victory
Nectar of the humans, satisfaction
Taste the amazing sugar

But victory might be spoiled easily
So we recommend you, serve it
Only when the food's very hot
And never cool it down again
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Le Mat

You have two choices
Zero or all, no buts
No in-betweens nor
Choosing two sides

You are the wise fool
The sane madman,
An idiot with wisdom,
Paradoxes fill us

We are the Fool,
Zero and twenty-two
Both the void and all
A mysterious paradigm

So follow us, dear friend
Walk the path of the Fool
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A Night

The Bee flutters toward us
Whispering his soft words
Into our fragile, unstable ears
Her speech breaks them all

It is a night with fireflies
Blinking lights on and off
Crickets sing a catchy tune
But no one dances together

Nights like this has been weird
Two boys find it weird too
Especially when there is void
No one to share but a Bee

She is like a mother, however
Protecting her kindred from
Perilous dangers above
And below the abyssal Earth
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