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A Painter & Writer's Magic [working title]



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By Yours Truly


comments are always welcome!


*oh also just FYI: this is not a fan-fiction of anything*


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The Plot


Humans live on Earth. Devils live in a far off universe, on a planet twice the size of Earth, called Pluto. Angels live on the clouds of Pluto. Wizards live in the underground world on Pluto, called The Underground.

Wizards are created to keep peace and harmony between Devils and Angels. But one day... the Wizards seem to be going endangered. Angels have been attacking Devils recklessly.

Now it's up to Audrey and Will to use their magic to help out the world of the supernatural.

One last thing: the Angels are the bad guys :twisted: and the Devils are the good guys :).
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The Settings


London
Pluto's Land
Pluto's Underground
Pluto's Sky
The Dream


(This isn't in order, but our friends do go to each of these places.)
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Worldbuilding


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Firstly, we'll start off with...

The Galaxy

Ever since existence was known, Devils, Angels and Wizards have lived on Pluto, a planet far away from Earth. Of course, Earth was created millenniums after Pluto.

In this galaxy, there's one solar system, one Sun, three Moons, three Stars, and a Planet.

Sun - there is one Sun called Sweztyn, and it's the size of Earth, dead in the middle of the solar system.
Moons - there are three Moons (from largest to smallest): Marcen, Marden and Maren. They rotate around Pluto and are twice the size of Mars.
Stars - there are only three Stars, part of each Moon but not connected. All three Stars are still unnamed. They're all half the size of Mars.
Planet - there is only one planet in all of the Galaxy - Pluto - which is twice the size of Earth. There's three parts of Pluto. The skies are where the Angels live. The land is where the Devils live. And the Underground is where the Wizards live.

Alright, so that topic aside, let's talk...


Magic and Death

Magic is a big part of Pluto and it's residents. Wizards, Devils and Angels all indulge in magic.

Wizards can use magic on Devils and Angels only just so they can keep peace and harmony between both. That's the only sort of magic they have. When it comes to death for Wizards, they can only be killed if they catch a glimpse of an angry Devil (Which is a scary scene - they usually turn monstrous with complete red eyes, disgustingly muscular bodies, horns, and a tail, and their clothes rip apart too. But when they transform back into their original form, the clothes sew themselves back, magically.) or if the Angels give them smiles. If they see an angry Devil, they die instantly. If they see Angels smiling at them, and if they're dazed, still staring at the Angels' smiles, then it'll take 25 hours for them to perish. And the time it takes to perish increases according to how much knowledge the Wizard has of magic.

Devils can use magic on every other thing other than themselves. They can use magic, but never for anything bad. Devils can only be killed with wooden spears, and the wooden spears would have had to pierce their heart. Once it pierces their heart, the Devil turns to mist. If the Devil has lives left, then the mist will form a number a minute later to show the number of how many there's left. Devils have three lives.

Angels can use magic on every other thing other than themselves - same as Devils. They can use magic for good and bad. They can be killed with flails swung to their waist. Once it hits them, they shatter into a bazillion pieces and if the Angel has one more life left, then a minute later, the shattered pieces will vibrate and form the number one. Angels have two lives.

Now, Humans also have magic, but only if they are half-Human and half-Wizard. The thing is: the father must be a Human and the mother a Wizard. Or Witch, in this case. But since all Wizards are good, then Witches are also, obviously, good. Humans have the ability to use one type of magic. For example, Human A will have the Ability to sing. Their soulmate - Human B - will have the ability to dance. When Human A wants to perform magic with their singing, they will have to recite a spell first and hold their soulmate's hand. So in shorter words: a Human must have an Ability, then recite a spell for their Ability, while holding their soulmate's hand.

In Audrey and Will's case, Audrey has the Ability to paint and Will has the Ability to write. For Audrey to perform magic to use with her painting, she will have to recite a spell for her painting while holding her soulmate's - Will's - hand.

Okay that was a lot of information. Now...


The Language

Everyone on Pluto speaks one language - Sabwarcken. I came up with the name, yes, and most of those letters come from the word 'Backwards', which is what Sabwarcken means in Sabwarcken. But I changed a letter, and added one more letter.

Basically, if you wanted to say something in Sabwarcken, it would be the same as English but the words would be said backwards. But, there will be an extra 'e' at the beginning of the first word. For example, if I wanted to say, "Writing is my hobby," it would be "Egnitirw si ym ybboh."
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The Characters


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Main Characters


Spoiler! :
Will Winchester


Name: Will Winchester.

Nickname: N/A.

Age: 23.

Gender: Male.

Appearance:
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Personality: Will is a cheery guy with loved ones, and he's flexible with them. When it comes to strangers, though, or anyone he's not familiar with, he's very rude towards them, and not comfortable at all. He'll be shifty, moody, and snap a lot. He'll be like stone.

Background: He's married to Audrey, the love of his life, who he met when he was fifteen years old in grade ten. It was almost love at first sight. He has a nickname he uses for her ~> Aud. They've been married for a year now. Anyway, he really loves writing, as I indirectly mentioned above. He used to work at a publishing company in London - close to where he lives - but then got fired because his boss wasn't pleased with all the hard-work he put into his work.

Powers: Whatever he writes, he can bring it to life with a couple of spells. If Audrey - his wife - draws anything, he can give it a story and a personality. Once he does, he would recite a spell, blow on the writing, and it'll be.

*will continue this later*


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Audrey Winchester


Name: Audrey Emmerson ~> Audrey Winchester.

Nickname: Aud.

Age: 23.

Gender: Female.

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Akolxohez


Name: King Akolxohez.

Nickname: Akol.

Age: 25.

Gender: Male.

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Zoya


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Random Notes That Flew Out Of My Mind

(And will be sorted later because I can't right now lol)
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The Chapters


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In which we get a sort of introduction to our two main characters and they go out for lunch.

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In which Audrey has a nightmare but Will doesn't take her seriously.

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In which Audrey and Will talk about Audrey's nightmare. Also, Akolxohez returns, rip.

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In which I give the devil a nickname because his original name was always painful to spell out.

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In which Akol takes Audrey and Will to some mystery place that you'll find out about in this chapter.

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In which our three MCs continue their trek through the dark forest and we also meet someone new.

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In which our friends are still walking and we also meet a new character!

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In which Audrey and Will are given a room and we see some interesting food here as well.

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In which we meet Ujalaa's older sister, Will confronts Akol, and we see The Dream.

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In which we meet Akol's brother briefly, the couple wake up and we also see some more of Zoya.

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In which the magic stuff finally happens.

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In which our friends finally go out for their quest and they also meet a someone they already met earlier.

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In which we set up camp.

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In which we meet a new character who helps out Akol but in the most annoying way.

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they got that magical iridescence that you don't expect to be on a sky rat y'know
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