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Mon Sep 23, 2019 4:51 pm
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Liberty says...



My first LMS. And I'm a Rogue.

And this is exciting!

So far... I've prepped two short stories. One of which I will be posting soon through the Publishing Center.

So yeah. That's my update.

Toodles! ;)
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Wed Sep 25, 2019 5:43 pm
Liberty says...



THEY HATE ME, I LOVE ME


Okie so I finished the first part of this short story and I feel like it's kinda rushed. The second part especially I find is quite rushed. I'll have to slow it down somehow. Maybe even make a new part. Like a third part so it, like, explains more.

Yeah. =)

Well. Can't really figure out what else to say.

Oh! Yes, um, Im wanting this short story to have a lesson that is obvious. Women can have freedom like men do in any place on earth. They can stand up for their rights as well. So now... I'll definitely edit a lot more and then hopefully I can make the lesson obvious. ^ยท^

Okay, I'm done my talk for now. If I have more to say, I will make another post related to this short story.
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