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The Light Maiden's Mark



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Mon Sep 11, 2017 11:36 pm
AneiDoru says...



This story is about a girl who wakes up in a different world that she can only go to while asleep, the world is Elega and it's very high fantasy-like. This also takes place in earth's future, where Artificial Superintelligence and magical creatures have melded into everyday life. So I guess it's high fantasy coupled with sci-fi.
  





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Tue Sep 19, 2017 3:56 am
Nymeria says...



This sounds cool. I think that while Elega is living through a story in the fantasy/future land it would also be interesting to see how this affects her normal life. Maybe she struggles with things like how does she know if it's real? Who can she tell? If it's real can anyone else go there? How does she explain to her parents why she's been sleeping so much?
Those are just some ideas.
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