I'm way overthinking this like I do with all my stories buuuuut I'd like some opinions on this one I want to write.
Basically, it's about this boy who was bullied really bad in elementary and middle school because he's a vampire and is different (the universe it's in vampires are extremely rare but someone having abilities is common, if that makes sense) and it just got worse in his high school years and it gets so bad he develops severe depression and begins to self harm and develops severe anorexia for fear if he gained any weight at all the bullies would have something else to make fun of. He hides it from his friends until one accidentally sees him and convinces him to let his other closest friends know and they help him through it.
It's supposed to be kinda anorexia awareness and how you never want it and how life-threatening it can be. A friend suggested I name it "Breaking Skin" because of several connection: one he is a vampire and his skin burns I never the sun, two he self harms and actually cuts his skin, and three the 'breaking' can represent he's been broken by the awful bullying.
I think I put some good thoughts into this, or I'm probably just overthinking it way too much. I'd appreciate some advice to help please? Thanks very much!
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