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Kill him now or later?



Kill him now or later?

NOW! The murderer deserves to die! How dare he even be seen at the funeral of the boy he murdered?!
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Kill him later... it's not like he's going anywhere.
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Tue Jul 18, 2017 5:57 am
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Woooahhh! That is beautiful, @Snoink! That skill is a gift. :o
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Thanks! ^^ I always did like cursive!

Though, because everything is handwritten, that means that I can't post any chapters on YWS yet. XD
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Tue Jul 18, 2017 4:30 pm
RubyRed says...



I think if I were a part of the mob I'd kill him later because if he were killed right then and there, to me, that would be wrong. Since it's the kids funeral it'd just be inhuman to shed more blood in that way.

True Christians wouldn't murder someone, even if they did kill someone else and use magic. it's no an eye for an eye anymore folks! forgiveness.


But I also agree with fortis here

I also think he should hide because I'd think there would be people in the mob that would definitely want to kill him then and there. However, that's just my opinion. Good luck! C:
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As for the "true Christians" thing... If we were all perfect, true Christians all the time, there would be no point to church, to the Bible, etc. These things teach us our wrongdoings and teach us our repentance. Without wrongdoing, there is no need for repentance.

My point being, people try to be good. People try really hard. But just because they go to church doesn't mean they're perfect, and if they have been hunting for Will, it's not unlikely that someone would stop the funeral service and demand justice for the death (in the form of a mob lynching).

All in all, I think it comes down to what you feel is more natural for the situation. No matter what you do, someone will disagree with you, so write what comes and you can always edit it later.
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