Hey all!
So, I've been working on editing Mage Chronicles and have decided to start a second project on the side while I'm editing. It's only in the planning stages but I'm pretty ecstatic about it.
"When their father’s half-brother overthrows him and takes control of the Draconian Kingdom, Crown Princes’ Raziel and Rion are sold into slavery. Two hundred and twenty-nine years later, Raziel is sold to the Captain of the King’s Guard, a man named Altair Dubon. What Raziel doesn’t know is that there is a reason that Altair has purchased the former Prince. Unbeknownst to the King, Altair is the leader of the Draconian Rebel Alliance and has been planning to return the throne to its rightful holders. They’re playing a dangerous game and this is only the start."
My problem is that, in order for you to understand what's happened to the Crown Princes, you have to see what happened to their family. I wrote the prologue and it tales place roughly 230 years before the first chapter. The main characters are Draconians, an immortal race of dragons with a human form so the time is incredibly doable for them. In fact, Raziel and Rion are babies compared to some of their counterparts. But is the time difference between chapters too much? Or would it work?
Thanks!
Shadow
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