Hello all!
So, as some of you know, I've been working on my book Mage Chronicles for two years now. I'm currently writing the second draft and I'm enjoying it. Recently, I've introduced a new character (his name is Cassius Storm) and he's going to be central to the storyline. He's the best friend of my main character, Ryder. Cassius isn't mentioned until his entrance in chapter fourteen because he's on a work assignment in Africa during the beginning of the book. My problem is that I'm not sure if I should have mentioned before now. He wasn't able to contact Ryder before because of his work (he's an assassin) but he does as soon as he's able.
If you were reading this, would you prefer to have prior knowledge of Cassius or would you be okay with his current entrance?
Thank you in advance!
ShadowPrincess16
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