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Wed Mar 15, 2017 7:42 am
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Perfect Machine


Overview
A ruthless inventor and a princess steal a mechanical dragon from a tyrannical queen. However, trying to keep what's rumored to be the most dangerous weapon ever built a secret is much, much harder than either of them first imagined. In pursuit of peace - and healthy doses of revenge - they stumble across things darker even than their twisted imaginations could have dreamed up.

Setting
Largely set in Fjordheim, an industrial city in Northern Europe built on the banks of a fjord. It's polluted and there's a large slum in the North West, and several canals criss-cross through the streets. The dwindling middle class live in the suburban areas near the South Pass, and the queen's Royal Palace is on a crag on the Northernmost corner of the city.

Characters
  • Einar Norgaard: a cut-throat inventor with a passion for machines and a knack for killing. He's cunning, distrustful, and very bitter - but also strangely kind. He resents the bad Fjordhiem has bought out in him.
  • Kara Jespersen: a resourceful princess. She's daughter of the queen, but shows little affection for her. She stole the dragon with Einar and is now forcing him to teach her how 'normal' people live.
  • Soren Antonopoulos: a notorious information broker. His knowledge has crippled many, and he is well-known throughout Fjordheim. He's flamboyant, humorous, and friendly, if a little pushy.

Installments Thus Far



Einar's Character Interview: here
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