in my story their is a little contradiction with the way my female character reacts both physically and in conversation with this boy compared to her thoughts. Its like she's two different people- easily intimidated with males because of her abusive step-father and yet she has these steamy thoughts of the boy. Anyone have any advice on how I can bring these things together a lot more?
It's a pity the dictionary has only one definition of beauty. In my world, there are 7.9 billion types of it- all different and still beautiful. — anne27
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