I came up with a new (somewhat weird) idea for my novel's ending. Basically, after the main characters attempt to escape the prison that the antagonists put them in, the female MC (Iris) is forced to leave the male MC (Cove) behind. She finds a safe haven (that her presumed-dead sister created), grieves, and begins to move on. Several weeks later, they decide to destroy/invade the prison, freeing many prisoners. Some are mutated, though. One of the more coherent prisoners tells Iris that horrible experiments have been taking place--the goal was to create a new superhuman race using a serum, but something went wrong. She finds Cove, who was one of the first to be experimented on; he now has fangs, wings/limited flight powers, and strangely colored eyes (think of the blank-eyed children of urban legends). He also can't speak. Once all the prisoners get back to the compound, Iris avoids them at all costs, even though Cove was her friend before this happened, and the others think she's a hero for rescuing them. Mercy (Iris's sister) asks her about this, and Iris reveals that she hates being around the prisoners/mutants because they're reminders of the Kingdom (antagonist group) and its cruelty. I don't know what would happen after that...
Sorry to ramble, but is this a good idea? Is it too weird or too depressing? And what should happen after Mercy and Iris's conversation?
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