I'm writing a fanfiction, too. Near the middle of the book, the three main characters find that there's a monster made of lava living in a nearby cave.
1. What should the monster be called? Beast/any variant of that word is out. It's hard to explain why, but I can't use that title in this specific story.
They learn that many townspeople have tried to kill it, but it either kills or curses anyone who tries, and that's why the town is so pathetic and dingy--half the people are dead, and the other half are extremely unlucky.
2. What should it curse random people (NOT the main characters) with? Besides plain old bad luck, that is. I'm thinking drug addiction, but is that a little too dark?
Finally, the three go into the cave to fight it, since they have powers to their advantage, and not much to lose. All seems lost until Finn, the one with ice powers, ends up in a terrible final battle one on one with the monster. He kills it, but his injuries and the exertion of using his powers for so long overwhelm him. He ends up in a coma and his survival is in doubt.
3. Should he die? If so, the book would end bittersweetly a few chapters later. Or should there be a sequel where he lives and something else happens to the group?
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