EDIT - here is my 3rd go around:
Molly wants to spend her summer before college winning the love of Noah. They’ve been friends since freshman year, but what he doesn’t know is that she’s always wanted it to be something more. Senior year was rocky, and Molly fears this summer could be her last shot at keeping him in her life. Her plan is complicated by the constant and overbearing presence of Noah’s girlfriend, and a three week mission trip to the Philippines she’s been waiting to go on all year.
One week into her perfect trip, the group she is traveling with is kidnapped at gunpoint by a rebel militia, leaving her life and her entire future in jeopardy. Noah is left reeling with the news. He’s supposed to be excited to start building a future with his girlfriend, but now he can’t stop thinking about Molly. Noah will have to decide how he really feels about Molly and if he’s willing to sacrifice his current relationship for a girl that might not ever come home.
Trapped in the jungle, Molly clings to the hope that she will make it out of this nightmare alive. She can’t die without ever telling Noah how she really feels, and she can’t waste her life waiting for freedom that may never come. With the help of her fellow captives, Molly devises an escape plan that could lead to their rescue if their captors don’t discover what they’re up to first.
CAPTIVE is a dual POV contemporary romance YA complete at 85,000 words and told in a nonlinear fashion. It will appeal to fans of STOLEN and IF I STAY.
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