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Need People To Beta Mage Chronicles



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Fri May 20, 2016 1:11 am
ShadowPrincess16 says...



Hey all!

So, I posted Mage Chronicles Book One in Novel Workshop not too long ago and I'm really trying to edit it. My problem is that I need people to read and tell me what they think is wrong with it. I'm mainly looking for plot inconsistencies and character development issues. Grammar would be nice as well but you don't really have to go that far. Thanks in advance!

ShadowPrincess16
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Fri May 20, 2016 1:51 am
Carlito says...



I started to read this a while back and I never finished because I got too busy with other things! I'm going to have a lot more free time starting next week and I can go back to it for you :)
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Fri May 20, 2016 2:12 am
ShadowPrincess16 says...



Thanks! I remembered you had been reviewing it but I figured you'd gotten busy. (Or my writing was so terrible that you couldn't handle it. Lol.)
“wanting what you could not have led to misery and madness”
― Cassandra Clare, Clockwork Prince
  








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