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New short idea and character name help!



Which name sounds the best with Bee?

Peony bee
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12%
Briar bee
2
12%
Sicily Bee
3
18%
Shirley Bee
10
59%
Other
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Tue Mar 08, 2016 11:34 pm
Charm says...



Hi!

Okay so I'm think of writing a short about a little girl named Bee and her cat, Maudie. It's going to be a series of flashbacks and it's going to be Maudie's POV (the cat's POV).

I need help on picking names for the little girl. She is called Bee but that's her middle name. I need help finding a first name.

If you are here to help with the name: do you like the options? Do you have nay ideas?

If you are here to help with the story: do you like the idea of the story? Do you have any advice?
  





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birk says...



Your short sounds cute. :3

And Shirley Bee sounds really good when you say it.
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Wed Mar 09, 2016 12:17 am
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@Birkhoff Thanks :)
  





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Wed Mar 09, 2016 10:14 am
Sins says...



Is Peony pronounced like Penny? If so, I rather like that. I agree with @Birkhoff on Shirley Bee too :)

I'm not sure if this counts as advice, but as you'll mainly be referring to her as 'Bee', don't stress too much over her first name!
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Sun Mar 13, 2016 1:46 am
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Oh my gosh, what an adorable idea! :O

I agree with Birkhoff - Shirley Bee sounds really nice on the tongue, and it's very cute. ^-^
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