The title is self-explanatory. I've started writing a novel titled Bad Lights, Good Lights, and am going with a steady pace right now. However, the reviews on the chapters are diminishing and I'm getting worried I wouldn't have feedback when I start doing the second draft for these chapters. The best way to get a reviewer is to finish the novel first, I guess, but being a writer I am, I would like to have a review on each chapter I've posted quick.
For those who are interested or curious, the novel is about a girl named Merah who found a light in her house, which told her about its bad people who were going to do bad stuffs to teenagers. Meanwhile, Merah had a problem with her father, and as the light promised to help grant her a wish, she made a surprising one in exchange of saving her own people, as the bad lights were also enemies of the good lights.
Came with extraordinary abilities, these lights needed human companions to fight against the bad lights. With family issue burdening her shoulder, could Merah achieve her mission to save mankind?
And that's about it. I'm currently at chapter 6.2 (each chapter consists of two pages of Microsoft Words) and want to get feedbacks as soon as possible. Here is the link to its prologue: Bad Lights, Good Lights [Prologue, Edited 1]. It would be awesome if you can proofread too.
That being said, if you don't want to post your feedbacks as reviews, you can always do it here. I don't mind. I'm going to post updates on this novel.
Gender:
Points: 25
Reviews: 472