Young Writers Society

So, usually, when I write poetry I end up with a /lot/ of really pointless imagery and I never have the heart to cut it out entirely/delete it. So I have tons of unnamed WFPs just littered with all these fragments that will probably never be used and their fate saddens me immensely.

Nothing is so tragic as forgotten imagery.

So, anyway, I'll be keeping random bits and pieces of my poems here. Feel free to add any pretty images you have here, if you want.

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(Also, I wouldn't mind any criticism on these bits and pieces, like--what do you think could make the images stronger? Are they scattered? Are they redundant/repetitive in what they have to say?)

Any more since you've posted? These are beautiful.

Oh, there're quite a lot by now, but I completely forgot about this thread. XD

Thank you!

Update:



Feel free to drop any of your own imagery here/comment on others'~

This is awesome. I lack in imagery department, so I'm so going to follow this thread. Want moar! xD I especially like the one with mouse and knife since it has repetition in it and I'm a sucker of repetition. xD

Haha, I tend to use too much repetition for my own good. One can only emphasise a thought so many times! Thank you, though.