my second story will reveal more but I only have fifty points but I'll give you a little spoil. So in the first story the Joker says that he is Jackie's real father. in the second story it reveals that Jackie admits that she was adopted and was left for dead on the streets
Just a tip here, from what you have there it doesn't sound that the two stories are very connected. When you write them, make sure there is a cause and effect happening. Meaning, there must be a reason why Jackie was adopted and left for dad on the street. And how those two facts correlate with the first story.
As for the points, you can review other people's works to gain points.
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